Persuasive letters related to The School We’d Like – Briony

Dear Mr Burford,

I am writing to you to tell you about my idea of the computer room because it will benefit the children and the teachers a lot.

 

The teachers won’t have to walk down the corridor which means the children won’t have to wait too long with their hand up.

 

Additionally, children will be able to hear what the teacher is saying and the teacher will be able to tell if we are talking which is good for our education; it will be quiet.

Breakfast club and film club can move to the hall. Wii fit can stay and chess club can move to the conference room. It will be quieter there for chess

 

The computer room I think is a good idea.

 

Yours sincerely

 

Briony

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